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Post by Marti Witchly on Oct 20, 2007 11:10:43 GMT -5
Code: Name:Marti WitchlyAge:11Year:1Appearance:She has long brown hair down to her back with bangs on her forehead. Her hair is usually worn in a ponytail. She's got sparkling green eyes. She's got rosy lips and cheeks. She's short about 5'0. She's kinda chunky. She's got small hands and feet. She's got medium sized ears. Please include at least a paragraph. A pic is optional:Wand:9 inches, Cherry, Unicorn Hair.Blood:Half-Blood history:Marti Witchly was born to David and Diane Witchly. David Witchly is a muggle and Diane Witchly is a witch. They met and fell in love when Diane was shopping for food. After they married they moved into a 2 story white and blue cottage in London. Diane gave birth to a daughter named Marti.
When Marti was 2 years old she showed signs of being a witch when she disappeared from her bedroom and reappeared in their backyard. When Marti was 3 Diane gave birth to another daughter named Elizabeth whom they nicknamed Beth.[(Please put some thought into this. A minimum of two paragraphs is preferred)/b] Personality.(Really tell us who your character is):She is a brave loyal person who will stand up for her friends and family. She is impatient and moody. She is caring and respectful to elders. She is rebellious since she wants to go to a school to learn more magic. She is shy when meeting new people, but, when she does get to know them she's outgoing.
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Post by Delta Le Stuart on Oct 21, 2007 10:30:30 GMT -5
First of all I’d like you to reread the plot and check the date of the plot, some of the things you have mentioned wouldn’t have happened at this time. For example there are no death eaters yet this is before hogwarts
Thankyou x
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Post by Marti Witchly on Oct 21, 2007 11:09:43 GMT -5
OOPS sorry! I'll change it right now!
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Post by Delta Le Stuart on Oct 21, 2007 15:17:52 GMT -5
Accepted
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